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[~Lost in Fantasy~]

Huwii, ths is awesome. The intro was misleading, which I love btw. Caught me by surprise when it suddenly became super catchy. As taintedLogic mentioned, the ending was a bit too sudden.
The mixing is spot on, and the structure is pretty good. I kinda missed an arpeggio laye, just to not make the track to repetetive, but that's really just my style and my preference X3.
Great track yet again :) larry.

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larrynachos responds:

I'm kind of worried that maybe the misleading intro led people to click away, which would have sucked lol.

This track is short and undeveloped because I was worried that if I touched it any more I would break it and it would suck.

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[Dead]

Great composition bro :). Like the lyrics and the guitar playing :).
The audio quality could have been better though, as the guitar drowns the vocals at some places :).

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SerPounce responds:

Thanks, really glad you dug this one! I still really need to shell out money for better equipment, and I definitely do need to work on my editing a bit.

[Phantom Shadows]

Most of what need to be said has already been said. this just sound like one big buildup really, and I just found myself waiting for a transition that never came :/. You pretty much nailed what you did do, love it. Think Drum N Bass is a genre that fits you, but need that melodic gold ;).

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Xstar7 responds:

thx. im still a bit new to making songs though x3

[The Abyss]

Pretty rad track this. A very original concept, and I low the synhs you use, the mixing is generall pretty good, and the arrangementi s pretty good. Only thing I want to comment is that the robotic wobble synth that comes in around 0:10 could use a tiny little bit of high frequencies. Just the highest ones really, because it's kinda clashing with some of your more high pitched synths.
another thing, the clap around 1:27 is a bit too loud. had to turn down my volume dow when it came in. Just turn the level down slightly and it should be ok :).

I'm just nitpicking really because I think that this was really good. No real major faults with it :D.

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Felocai responds:

I'va noticed that the clap is to loud few days after I finished the track becouse I was working with really bad speakers when uploading that, so I didn't notice that.
Now I bought better speakers, so problems like that shouldnt occur anymore :)
Thanks for reviewing!

[He Is Near]

Nice track. Actually quite liked the wierd intro. Really helped to add to the mysterious aura of the song :). The lyrics are pretty fantastic, and I love the singing :D. Perfect for this song. The arrangement of the song is spot on, and the mixing is really well done, especially considering the vocals as well :D.

Don't really have much wrong to say about this one :). Maybe the voices could have come clearer to thhe mix at some points, as I can't always hear what you're singing.

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SoulSecure responds:

Hey thanks for the review!

I've been using a Logitech USB headset for vocals for 7 years now and that is why the vocals aren't crisp. I'm getting a new vocal setup worked out right now, but even after that is all good, I think I'm doing all the songs for this album with the headset for the sake of conformity.

[A Hero Rises]

Perfectly mixed orchestral track where the instruments all blend well together and some very nice melodies. I do wish this was a bit longer though, got a bit disappointed when it ended so soon. Also I wish that the bass section would be a bit more.. bassy. Kinda didn't feel tose low cello and tubas that helps add to the power of the song.

Only real criticism I can come with really :). Great track. Would have gotten a 5/5 if it was longer.

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sleepFacingWest responds:

Thanks! I added some sub-bass sine waves to beef up the low end, but I think it got a little washed out when I added the reverb in post. I'll try to crank it harder the next time I approach a brass choir piece. Some percussion doubling the attacks of the bass instruments might also help fill out the space. I'll look into it.

[Reasons]

Great dnb tune you got here. Creative with some really cool and interesting ideas implemented.
There are several things I want to comment on. First of all the bass synth tht comes in around 0:50 totally kills off everything else happening in the track. It's overpowering the pads a great deal, the square leads, the kick, the clap. Pretty much everything. Needs to be both eq'ed and leveled better. Try to cut some of the frequencies your padd and square shines from the bass and lower it a bit.

Also, apart from the kick, the clap and snare really annoy me. The snare has too much low end. When you have a "kick-snare" pattern like that the point is that you either want a high pitched kick with a low pitch snare, or a low pitch kick with a high pitched snare or clap. If both the kick and snare are hitting the same frequencies, the track will become annoying and tiring for the listener after a while.

Also this track is a bit too slow for a dnb track. You should speed the tempo up a bit IMO.

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Maddus responds:

Thanks for the review but It's not a Dnb tune,and that's the reason why it's slow. If it is then I should've clicked the Dnb genre prior uploading.

[Epicbit]

This is really good :D Major composing talent, and this track is as original as it gets. Really like how you mixed orchestral and 8-bit together in such a smooth way. Doesn't sound forced at all.
The structure is great and mixing is pretty spot on.
Only thing I can criticise is the quality of the orchestral instruments. Strings are the most annoying samples to work with digitally because it's much easier to notice the quality of the sample than with horns or drums. All the synths in this are sweet sounding and pretty much perfect.

Another thing I want to say is that I think the track started a bit abruptly. Maybe copy the entire first 16 seconds section and make it so the track starts with 16 seconds without the percussion, and then 16 seconds with the percussion?. Think it would be a smoother transition to the next section as well. Just a thought :).

Overall an excellent and original track, which I'm always a fan of :D.

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Shurrikane responds:

Thanks a lot for your review!
Next time I will do my best to fix these issues ;)
Thanks! =)

[The Ocean, The Sky]

Sweet sound :). Really liked the struture, even though I kinda missed a drop of some sort. The eq'ing could have been done better to make the song sound cleaner.
If you want, you could send me the project file for one of your songs and I can give you some indepth feedback on how you can clean up your mix :). Kinda hard to hear all the issues without actually seeing them :).

xxUltimaWeapon responds:

I would totally send you the files, but because I made this with the FL demo, half of the instruments and effects I used wont be included in the file. Next song I write, i'll definitely hit you up with the files, because I really need some guidance as far as eq'ing goes. I'm glad you liked the song though for the most part. =P
Thanks for the review.

[Optimistically]

Again, I don't know how to review this XD. Only thing I can say is that I loved the lyrics and I loved the song X3. Your voice does have a lot of potential, but doesn't sound like you gotten any lecturing it or anything. You should keep improving your voice, and I'm sure it will be an even greater tool for your music making in the future :).

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SerPounce responds:

Thanks a bunch again! I've been working primarily on my guitar, bass and vocals lately, so I've been getting better. My two best songs vocals-wise are probably Mirrors and Sing Me to My Rest, if you have an interest in checking them out, thanks again mate. ;*